Am compus mai multe versuri in limba engleza si as dori sa stiu: Va plac?

I thought i was a way to far
And tried to reach my shining star
When i got there a while ago
Then u left…i knew you'll go.
But not right now…it's way too soon
Cause i need you…i miss you so
And now you're gone, what shall i do?
You left a mark …an open sore
It's nothing that i know for sure...
Even it's hard and hurts a lot
I have to say it's more then that...
I'll love you and i'll miss u more
I hope you'll hill my open sore
Be my angel…be my guide
Be always with me and hold me tight.

Hey...versurile sunt superbe, aproape m-au facut sa plang...te rog sa imi trimiti ca mesaj mai multe versuri pe care leai scris(bineinteles daca vrei asta.)ideea e ca vreau sa imi fac un caiet cu versuri..multumesc anticipat :*

Aww so cute! Love it. Sa mai compui;]. Te pricepi. Succes ^^.

Despre astea ce parere aveti? Credeti ca am talent?
When i was lost in my own way,
You showed up and said to me "Hey"
"Wake up and fight,
This isn't the end,
You have to go straight,
And never pretend."
I don't know how to thank you enough,
You're always smiling but also you're tough.
You are so sweet, so warm and cand,
That sometimes i feel like i lost my mind.
Talking to you it's a blessing to me,
You make me strong, you set me free.
I wrote those word so late at night,
Please keep being yorself and hold me tight.
Even if i'm so far away,
I'm thinkin' of you, i actually pray,
For you to be a shining star,
Who showes me the way wherever you are.

Sunt foarte Frumoase?, scuzati intazierea))

Buna din tot sufletul! Doream sa te intreb daca ma poti ajuta cu niste versuri despre o dragoste neinceputa! Sunt pe cale sa scot o piesa dar nu sunt inspirat deloc! Asa ca am decis sa iti trimit acest mesaj sa te intreb! Multumesc anticipat!

Mă poți ajuta cu o continuare la versurile astea:
You have style
You have All You need
You seduced me
You now what im liked