| NuAmContDeMere a întrebat:

Ce parere aveti de urmatoarea poezie?

Pornography of Death

I'm waiting in the dark,
Waiting for the death,
Behind my back she'll bark.
Her lips will touch my ears, letting me half-deaf.

She touches my skin, she is sublime,
She stains it with sins, that artist of crime.
Her moving fingers are covered by lace,
And as she makes me scream, I fall into disgrace...

We're only two dirty pervert creatures
Having dark thoughts about nouns and preachers.
That kind of love, a burning monster,
And when she got me naked, it burned faster.

I loved her, she made me go insane
Even so, I wished she wouldn't love me that way.
But tied up and chained, well I was helpless
And that look on her face, it was priceless.

And she scratched me tot the blood,
I was her little humiliated bod.
That taste of the pain,
Wasn't going to show ever again.

It was like a fire of ice
Impossible to describe, it was so nice...
Than, the dark shadows appeared on my face,
I took the whip covered in lace
And gently I hurt my lover.
I drew some feelings on her soul, she couldn't recover...

Than she hugged me until she stole my breath,
She was my sweet delicious death.
She bit my lip with her mouth of steel.
We crawled closer, we were shaking, she could feel.
And no one could heal our mental illness
We're the crazy queens from a game of Chess.

1 răspuns:
| thegatekeeper a răspuns:

E chiar buna, dupa parerea mea. Daca tu ai scris-o, atunci pot spune chiar ca-mi place felul in care scrii si, in special, tema poeziei acesteia. Te sfatuiesc sa continui sa scrii si sa citesti cat mai mult in engleza, pentru vocabular, expresii si asa mai departe. Bravo!