Este prima mea poezie scrisa in engleza stiu ca nu este foarte buna ceva pareri?

When the one you love doesn’t love you
You feel you’re left standing in the dark
Wishing this reality were untrue
And days pass and pass and pass...
When the one you love doesn't know you exist
You feel descouraged because he won't find your affection
This is so sad, so unjust
And you're going to another direction
Something makes you stop on the road
You look back and see how everything is falling apart
You try to walk but you look back
What I mean is that
I love you
I can't forget you
I see that you always my way
In the magazines
do you understand what i mean?
Only a fool l would say
if you’ll let me love you
It’s for sure I’m gonna love you, all the way!

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