FUNDA Buna cum vi se pare? : One day afternoon last summer I decided to go with some friends of mine to the seaside. Outside it wae very hot. We were walking around the beach when we saw some people playng voleyball. It seemed so funny so we decided to join the game. During the game suddenly wa heard a scream and to our horro one of the girl had screming because she sae a shark.Afraid we colud see one of the boys who were playng voleyball dive into the water
we didn't know what supposed to do. I was waiting helpless when we saw how out of nowhere something pulled the girl into the water and the boy dissapered...
Cam atat momentan vreau sa stiu daca am gresit cv si sa-mi spuneti cum ar fi corect mersi 
Mai corect ar suna asa:
one afternoon last summer i decided to go to the seaside with my friends. the weather was hot. we were walking on the beach when we saw some people playing volleyball. it seemed to be funny and we joined the game. during the game, a girl from water started to scream because she saw a shark. a boy tried to save her but he became the victim. when we saw that the boy dissapeared, we started to panic...
parca asa ar suna mai bine...la sfarsit nu prea intelegeam ce vrei sa spui asa ca am modificat putin. spor la scris.
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Outside it wae very hot? Outside it was very hot. In rest... depinde ce clasa esti, mi se pare destul de buna!
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... Outside it was verry hot. we were walking around the beach when we saw some people playing voleyball. It seemed so funny so we decided to join them. Durring the game, suddenly we heard a scream and one of the girls screamed cause she saw a shark...cam atat, in rest e ok.
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