Maine trebuie sa dau un test la engleza pentru a ne incheia mediile si ne-a spus ca ne va da un text sa lucram pe el si un alt text sa ii corectam greselile literare/gramaticale. Nu ma prea pricep la gramatica, imi este tare frica, nu imi pot da seama de greseli ma gandesc ca poate este corect si nu stiu eu. Am gasit in manual tot asa un text/ o compunere unde trebuie sa gasesc greselile. Eu le-am notat dar nu cred ca sunt bune, imi puteti spune greselile? Va rog! Nu ne va da textul acesta dar vreau sa repet si sa ma verific aici!
Funda si vot!
Textul:
My happiest day
Yesterday was my happiest day of my life. I was at shopping with my mother and I buy a lot of clothes. I convey at restaurant, I walked around city and I read many interesting stories. Also, yesterday I have a good time with my friends. I was in P A R K with they and we walked by rollers. It was fantastic! But yesterday I didn't eat cotton candy and I didn't listen music, what I regret very much. I didn't had time neither for bike and for my favourite games, neither for the slumber party planned, for computer etc.
However it was a special day!
Multumesc mult :*
Yesterday was the happiest day of my life. I went shopping with my mother and I bought many clothes. I went to a restaurant ( nu am auzit inca de convey in acest context, to convey - to express a thought, feeling, idea that are understood by other people ), I walked around the city and I read many interesting stories. Also, yesterday I had a good time with my friends. We went to the parca with our rollerblades. It was fantastic! But, yesterday I didn't eat cotton candy nor did I listen to music, which I regret very much. I didn't have time for riding the bike nor for playing my favourite games, nor for the planned slumber party, nor for playing computer games. Scuze pentru unele modificari in plus... topica nu mi s-a parut potrivita. Sper totusi ca ai prins ideea.
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După relevanţă
I was shopping ( formarea verbului la trecut. "at" e in plus)
I have bought a lot of clothes ( motivul aici este la verbul de deasupra)
I conveyed at a restaurant (la fel verbul e la trecut, iar restaurant are nevoie de articol (gen a sau an))
I had a good time (timp trecut)
in the parca (Park are nevoie de articolul THE atunci cand vorbim de ceva specific)
Them (traducerea in Romana a they este Ei. Them in romana este CU ei. intelegi?)
listen TO music ( am uitat aici de ce 
)
I didn`t have time ( ce ai folosit tu e pentru persoana a 3a)
Ce probleme ai.
traduci mot-a-mod(adica cuvant cu cuvant)
Nu stii ce timpi sa folosesti (Sfat: gaseste cuvinte care exprima timpul gen Yesterday (trecut), Today (prezent), Tomorrow (Viitor). Etc
Nu stii sa pui articolele acolo unde e nevoie.(aviz ce am zis mai sus
Ai grija de persoana la care se vorbeste
Uite o forma corecta a textului:
Yesterday was my happiest day of my life. I was shopping with my mother and I have bought a lot of clothes. I conved at the restaurant, I walked around the city and I read many interesting stories. Also, yesterday I had a good time with my friends. I was in the parca with them and we walked on roller-skates. It was fantastic! But yesterday I didn't eat cotton candy and I didn't listen music, which I regret very much. I didn't have time neither for bike or my favourite games and neither for the slumber party planned or for the computer.
However it was a special day!
Răspunde
1.I bought a lot of clothes
2. I had a good time
3. with them
4.I didn't have
Nu sunt eu de 10 pe linie la engleza, dar de 9, 80 sunt si cred ca astea ar fi greselile. oricum sunt sigura ca sunt din neatentie. Succes la test!
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